As an acquisitions editor for a publishing company, I see a
lot of mistakes that result in the rejection of stories. Many of these
rejections could have been avoided. Let’s talk about some of the more frequent
reasons a manuscript might be rejected.
The first thing you want to do before you even submit, is
make sure you get a second set of eyes on your manuscript, not family or
non-writing friends, but a fellow author, preferably someone who writes in your
genre. Even a seasoned author can miss things. Rinse and repeat. I
need a beta reader. This is not an option if you want to be taken
seriously.
If you don’t have one, I can direct you to a great critique
group online that’s free. www.critiquecircle.com.
Many authors have launched their careers from this site, developed friendships
and found peers to help them along in their publishing journey. It’s important
you hone your craft. Editors are not there to clean up messy manuscripts. They
are there to tweak minor flaws and plot holes. We are not the author. We do not
rewrite your books. Your story should be scrubbed clean and as flawless
as you can make it before you even think of hitting send.
Now that your manuscript is clean, let’s talk about some of
the things that will get you an automatic no.
·
Your query letter. Please don’t tell me what
other publishers you’ve been rejected by and why. Don’t tell me how many cats
you have, or children, or that you are into this craft or that. Unless it has
to do with your writing experience, I really don’t care. Your query is a sales
pitch. You want to keep it positive and yes, professional. Please make sure it
is free of grammatical errors and you address it properly. A submission to Mr. when the editor is a Ms., won’t sit well. If
there is no specific person to address it to, dear editor is fine. Many editors
reject at this introduction if you don’t go out of your way to make it the best
it can be. So make sure you knock our socks off and we know why we must have your story.
·
Know what the publisher publishes. This is a big
one. You don’t submit children’s picture books to an erotic romance publisher.
Go to the publisher’s site and research
the kind of books they represent. Still not sure? Read their guidelines.
It will clarify things. Still not sure—contact us. It is better to ask, than to
assume.
·
Which brings me to the next issue. Read their
guidelines. If we ask for the first two chapters and a synopsis, give us the
first two chapters and a synopsis. Not chapters five and six, or the whole
thing. Or if we ask that you submit a special form and provide directions on
where to get it, please take the time and fill it out. We have it for a reason
and by not sending it, you are telling us you don’t take this process seriously.
Why should we take you seriously?
·
Formatting. Every publisher has different
requirements. If we state we want double spaced Times New Roman and at 12pt,
this does not mean single space cursive in red at 16pt. You’re a writer. If you
don’t know what I'm talking about, you better get a book and brush up on Word.
·
Simultaneous submissions. If a publisher says
they don’t take them, please respect their request and either wait until you
hear back from the other publisher, or hold off submitting to anyone else until
you hear back from us. Most publishers have fairly quick turn around, but if it
exceeds the time we stated we needed to review, feel free to contact us and
ask. We may not have received it. Nothing makes an editor as angry as spending
time to read a submission, only to find out the author published it elsewhere after we told you up front we didn’t take simultaneous submissions. The
publishing world is a small place. Don’t burn bridges.
·
No-nos. All publishers list what they don’t want
to see. Ever. Slipping something we don’t accept into the middle of the story
because you think we’re going to miss the incest or bestiality, won’t just get
you rejected, you’ll probably end up on a do
not publish list.
Now that I covered what will get you a rejection, I want to
talk for a moment about submission etiquette. If you receive a rejection letter
stating your story is not the right fit for our company, please do not email
back and ask why. We are busy, receiving hundreds of submissions a year and do
not have the time to critique every manuscript that comes into our inbox. It
should have been critiqued before you sent it. If we say it wasn’t a right fit—it
wasn’t a right fit—move on.
If however you are lucky enough to get a revise and
resubmit, the editor will tell you what needs to be fixed if you would like to
be considered for publication with our house. This does not mean you have a
yes, you have a maybe. Fix it and resubmit.
Acceptance. Do a happy dance. We’ll be sending you a
contract soon.
I hope this was helpful. Just remember, every author goes
through this process. We do our time and eventually our craft is honed enough
to start seeing acceptance letters. Rejections are part of becoming an author.
Take them for what they are and keep trying.
Best,
D. L. Jackson
3 comments:
Great advice, DL! :)
Thanks for the advice, and the critique group site.
I love Critique Circle. It's a great place to polish up and meet peers. Thanks for stopping by.
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