I have this switch in my
brain that says, done! There are a couple of reasons this has happened. The
first is that my publishers wanted smaller stories, so I gave them what they
wanted. The second is that by writing shorter stories, I have trained myself to
write everything like a short.
This is a habit I need to
break. Yes, it’s good that I know how to cram a lot into forty thousand words
and make it work, but I need to work on pulling out of this to write a bigger
novel. With ninety thousands words, I have a lot more detail I can expand on
and I can only get there if I retrain the brain to embrace the detail. I can
get into character backgrounds deeper, explore secondary plot threads fully,
but the moment I start, that switch flicks and it says cut, cut, cut.
For the next six months,
I’m getting back to my roots and writing a full novel. So far, it has not been
easy. My brain wants to prioritize details so I can fit a smaller word count.
If I’m going to break eighty thousand words, I need to break this habit. So, as
I write this story, I’ll post updates on my progress.
See, I’ve noticed more
and more people wanting longer stories. They love my shorts, but wish there was
more of that world than I gave them. It’s a comment I hear often. I listen to
my readers, everything they say, good and bad, and I won’t apologize for saying
it is why I feel reviews are as much for the authors as they are for the
readers. I’ve been called on that, and I’m still standing my ground. Reviews
are helpful to the authors too.
I certainly can accommodate
everything you're asking for, but I ask you to please be patient while I spin you
a big ass story you can immerse yourself in. I’ve written one hundred and ten
thousand word manuscripts before, but I’ve been writing novellas and small
novels for seven years, and it’s a process of relearning how to expand.
This I will promise. It
will have an unusual premise, that could happen, even on Earth. This will be an
otherworld dystopian romance. You will see the same freaky world building you’ve
told me you love in my stories. It will have high stakes (very high), and I’m
packing on the sexual tension even though this will not be erotic romance. It
will have sex scenes, but there will be less than in my erotic romances.
There will be some dark
and scary stuff that happens. I’m taking my time building this relationship
between my hero and heroine and it won’t be all fluffy bunnies and fuzzy
kittens. As I said before, I’m an evil author and I’m putting them through
their paces before I let them have that happily ever after. If you don’t finish
reading it feeling a little bit freaked out about something happening on our
world now, I won’t have done my job. My aim is to plant seeds of doubt and
insecurity.
I have five thousand
words and I’m off and running. A lofty goal to be sure, but I’m excited about
this project. I’m in love with the premise and hell, I’m going to blow some
things up. That in itself has me squealing.
Wish me luck.
D L
5 comments:
Oh, I can't wait to read this one. I love your stuff whether short or long.
And I agree. I learn a lot from reader reviews, too. Not all, but the ones where the reader goes into detail as to what they liked and didn't like as constructive criticism. Then I take that information with me for the next story.
All the best, DL. Though I'm sure this story will rock!
I do wish you much luck! I read this post with great interest. The first book I wrote was 130,000 words. Yikes! It was wordy. I was a novice, and had not grasped the concept of over-writing and just how annoying it can be. So much to learn. Recently a had a beta reader read Aaydan's Tale--and she actually said, "You need more details." Oy! Still, I search for that happy place somewhere in between ;-) I will be back to check on your progress. :-)
Ack! The one thing I don't like about blogger is the inability to go back and edit comments once you post.
Thanks, Jessica snd Teresa.
It's a balancing act to be sure. I find there's a huge difference between writing novellas and shorts, and writing long novels. When you get in the habit of doing one, it's hard to get out of it to write the other. This is proving to be a challenge for me. I don't want to slow the story down, but I also need to expand with detail that I don't usually go into with novellas and shorts.I hear that those that write movie scripts also struggle with shifting to novels or novellas.
I've got one of those large beasts and it happens to be my first story. I've learned a lot from writing shorts. Now I just need to learn again what I can sacrifice and what I shouldn't.
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